11 August 2011 - Analysing Examples of Explanations... My Success Criteria
-An intro that tells about the topic
-Vocabulary that is related to the topic
-Paragraphs with 1 main idea
-Correct punctuation
-A great conclusion that sums up nicely
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16 August 2011 Oral Language: WALT explain & present
i need to work on looking at the camra
STOP saying um
and stay on topic
22.8.11: WALT find the main idea & summarise What Happens When You Are Asleep?
Firstly some people may grind their teeth, suck their thumbs, sleep walk, sleep talk, snore, and pedal their legs. It’s all very embarrassing but you don’t have to worry because it’s all part of life and every one does one or two of them. They will grow out of it.
Secondly your body slows down, your mouth stops making saliva, your heart beats slower, and your breathing slows downs.
As well as that when you sleep you can hear what is going on around you. You would be able to hear the alarm clock or, if you’re like my mother, a baby crying. If you hear anything unusual you would instantly wake up.
Finally while you are sleeping you also dream. Dreaming is when your have a long vision in your head while you are asleep. Nobody knows what their dreams mean. Some people sit with tape recorders and notebooks on their bedside tables. I don’t think our dreams mean anything. They are just there to keep us busy while we are asleep. This is what happens when we are asleep.
sleeping habits
what your body does when your asleep
some things can wake you
dreams
25.8.11 - I have been learning to assess my own writing using our writing progress indicator matrix. I used it to self-assess my first piece of writing for this term. Then I discussed it with Miss Matangi-Hulls so I know where I'm at in my writing learning and my next steps. Here is my matrix...
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11 August 2011 - Analysing Examples of Explanations...
My Success Criteria
-An intro that tells about the topic
-Vocabulary that is related to the topic
-Paragraphs with 1 main idea
-Correct punctuation
-A great conclusion that sums up nicely
See Here
16 August 2011
Oral Language: WALT explain & present
i need to work on looking at the camra
STOP saying um
and stay on topic
22.8.11: WALT find the main idea & summarise
What Happens When You Are Asleep?
Firstly some people may grind their teeth, suck their thumbs, sleep walk, sleep talk, snore, and pedal their legs. It’s all very embarrassing but you don’t have to worry because it’s all part of life and every one does one or two of them. They will grow out of it.
Secondly your body slows down, your mouth stops making saliva, your heart beats slower, and your breathing slows downs.
As well as that when you sleep you can hear what is going on around you. You would be able to hear the alarm clock or, if you’re like my mother, a baby crying. If you hear anything unusual you would instantly wake up.
Finally while you are sleeping you also dream. Dreaming is when your have a long vision in your head while you are asleep. Nobody knows what their dreams mean. Some people sit with tape recorders and notebooks on their bedside tables. I don’t think our dreams mean anything. They are just there to keep us busy while we are asleep. This is what happens when we are asleep.
25.8.11 - I have been learning to assess my own writing using our writing progress indicator matrix. I used it to self-assess my first piece of writing for this term. Then I discussed it with Miss Matangi-Hulls so I know where I'm at in my writing learning and my next steps. Here is my matrix...
2.9.11 - Goal Setting & Reflections...
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